I hear Agony from your words


If I could feel this much pain just by reading what you wrote,
I wonder how much more there is as you turn those emotions into words
Your put your hands over your eyes to prevent the tears from falling,
You try to hold your breath just to keep your mouth from screaming.

Trying to hold the pen straight had never been this hard from you,
Yet you kept on writing whatever’s left of what you thought was true
Agony tied you in chains and you’re losing hope you could break free
Memories of what used to be haunt you in your sleep and in reality

If I could, I’d take away your sorrow and carry it on my shoulder,
The past you wish to forget, I’d be the one to painfully remember
When you feel the world has deserted you,just call out my name
I’ll be there in a flash trying to make you feel okay

If its space that you need I’d let you have it and just wait here
I ask nothing in return but hope that better you will feel
How do I unbreak and unshatter the pieces of your heart
Tell me what I can say or do to make everything alright.

This is still undergoing construction, so I’d really appreciate any insights and comments you might have

(C) Joan Miranda

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7 thoughts on “I hear Agony from your words

      • David says:

        well…I always seem to publish and then see things I don;t like…then I edit like crazy after it’s published…lol…I say…look at it after an hour or so and at that point, you’ll see it with new eyes…but honestly, it’s very good as is

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